Your Smile

Painting \ Still life | 10/04/07 @110 | Jumplove | critiques (16) | views (843)

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This was done in painter while at home with my broken ankle.

I know there are several problems with this picture, one being anatomy, I was trying to Paint something without reference. It's not that I have anything against them, but I try to be a bit more original with my pieces.

As I was painting, I guess I was a bit frustrated with time and decided to just finish it off which is why the texture of the body (below the neck) came out the way it did.

If anyone can give suggestions on this, I will be grateful. After my ankle heals, I going to try to edit this. Thank you.

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Comments (16)

Roadrunner

10/04/07 @132

I am not a painter, but I dont see any major problem with the anatomy here.

The lower part (skirt /legs) can use more work. It is not bad, but not as smooth as the parts above.

I think it is very good. I like how you did the metal parts. Great job!

jdlfx

10/04/07 @135

this is absolutely amazing (considering that you didn't use any ref), I love the eyes and the hair.

it might just be me but its hard to find the light source especially with the shadows on the legs

but you still get 8/8

landeroc

10/04/07 @155

Are you sure you did not use any reference? 'Cause it is absolutely fantastic! To jdlfx, the light source I am sure is coming from above. Looks pretty clear to me.

FinalTouch

10/04/07 @222

this is amazing!!! ^_^

SilverStylus

10/04/07 @263

Keep up the great work - you did a fantastic job with the hair...

it looks so convincing!

Mert

10/04/07 @316

I don't see any anatomical problems here. Sweet work!

Zazill

10/04/07 @488

Hope your ankle heals soon

Anatomy good : check nicely done artwork : check
confirm that artist is exceptionally good : check

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razpna

10/04/07 @498

how sunny work

curlyhair

10/04/07 @532

Very realistic! Cute and sexy ^_^

ersen-t

10/04/07 @535

nice work.
good colors.

Daykan

10/04/07 @830

I don´t see anatomical problems... Really beautiful!!
Love the design and character!!!
Very nice work!!!

Madanapale

10/06/07 @966

Hard to believe you didn't use a photo reference....The perspective and anatomy is excellent.
Beautiful colors!
Carlos

Alonso

10/10/07 @364

the expresion and composition look nice to me, my crit would be in the color area, maybe some pinks, purples, blues in the face can improve her beautiful face. The emotion in every stroke is great.

thomasM

10/11/07 @873

what an amazing work
look so realistc although painted alittle rough
just amazing^^
9/9

blackshad

10/28/07 @429

excellent work mika
you did well

keep it up

Gods-Mistake

03/17/08 @676

I just spilled my drink all over the screen, when I read "I know there are several problems with this picture, one being anatomy". Hahaha!
Wonderful.
You tell me, you are 15 and didn't have any reference for this one?
If this is true, do you have any idea what this means? Hahaha. There are people that train all their life and don't even get close.
Goddamn. Whatever you did or do:
PLEASE, keep up that pace!
And if you are really urging for tips, you may try this: http://www.scribd.com/doc/334333/Constructive-Anatomy
Hope that helps.

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